What if I took you,
To a room stuffed with letters,
Some red some blue
Kept together in pairs of two
What if I told you,
The letters left you with no place
To breath, to relax
Or simply have your own space
What if I convinced you,
That shards of glass
Were concealed in the blue
And in the red ones,
Soft petals with a gorgeous hue
What if I broke it to you,
That the contents of these letters
Were but your thoughts
Piled together, and kept in lots
What if I asked you,
Which type would you expect to find
In your room of thoughts
Hidden in your mind?
Would the blue overrule the red?
Would you hope for it to be the other way instead?
Would you wish your room wasn’t suffocating
Would you criticize it and be hating
Yourself, and more blues would be formed
And there you go!
In a vicious cycle your thoughts are transformed
But, What if I said,
It's you who’s in charge
Of managing your garden bed
Whether you want more of petals or shards
Is merely upto you
Whether you want more of red
Or absolutely no blue
Because I have to say…
You will end up visiting your room of thoughts
Where whether or not you enjoy your stay
Depends on every little thought
crossing your mind throughout the day...
wow! that started out as a dark poem, but ended on a note of hope and motivation, which was really good! Well expressed, keep it upp!
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