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The final flame

 


 

 

She was consumed by darkness
The moonlight vanished by touching her skin
And shadows grew even more intense
As they passed the lanes she lived in

But even though she lived 
in such lack of light
She always kept something hidden,
out of their sight

She clung on to it tight
Her only ray of hope
The only rope she had
Before she fell down the slope

Unfortunately, they exhaled hard
as her inner flame arrived
Wiping away the one reason
her soul had survived

They blew her final flame
the only way she managed to not fall
When the cliff was right behind her
Luring her with an inviting call...

- Palavi K.

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  1. This felt like a conclusion/sequel to your previous story; well constructed...
    Keep writing, and best of luck!

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  2. Woah that's really great. You have again done a wonderful job. Keep it up

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