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Untold

A raindrop once said, 

while sharing his pain 

"I have been through much more 

than just going down the drain 

I have been wasted, I have been saved

I have been soaked, I will be again

Though I've seen so much 

The thing that left a scar

was watching a cloud suffer

by each drop forced in, so far

but it didn't complain, it didn't cry

patiently waited to silently die-"


he stopped midsentence as his voice just died 

After which teardrop cried,

"I get where you come from

these struggles are no joke

though we seem to be mere drops,

we're proof of lost hope" 


Raindrop nodded in pain

then stood completely still

as he noticed blood drop's 'sigh's

and the tragedy hidden beneath his eyes

just the extent of what they had to hold 

convinced him people have stories far worse and untold...

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  1. Wordplay-TRS9 August 2022 at 20:52

    Great concept, and nice execution! Keep it up...these poems keep getting better :D

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